Final ideas

So i have decided to go with the emotion ‘sad’
I have also decided to go with my ideas of tears on the page, while this is a bit too obvious i feel that adding a phrase into the piece such as ‘We’re over soz’ would add a level of sophistication to the piece for the viewer to latch onto.

However with close attention to the brief ‘We’re over soz’ was not working, so i needed to reword it to incluse the actual emotion. This left me with the idea of using the phrase ‘We’re over, don’t feel sad x’

I feel this retains the level of sophistication i wanted as well as stays true to my initial idea.

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